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Characters With Personality
My librarian and I share a passion for mysteries and thrillers. She knows my tastes so well now that she puts new books on reserve for me as soon as they are in the system. But when I think about our conversations about the latest story that we both loved, I can't help but notice that we talk about the characters. Inevitably, the exchange goes something like this:
Sometimes we talk about a good plot twist - but eighty per cent of the time, our enjoyment is based on our involvement with a character that draws us into the story. In fact, characters are so important to the success of a novel that I am sometimes amazed by the lack of thought writers give to (a) character creation and (b) the way they introduce those characters. Case in point: Some months ago someone gave me a character profile to look at. Now, admittedly, the character profiles I see vary wildly - some are mundane lists of hair/eye/skin colour plus birthdates and star signs; others are almost a story in themselves, containing snippets of the character's thoughts and wry observations from the author. However, this one made the character seem so dull I wondered how it would be possible to write about her in a way that would hook the reader. I'm going to change a few identifying details here and there to protect the innocent, but essentially, it read like this:
This is just a small excerpt from a four-page character profile - but what comes through very strongly was that Jody is a DULL character. She is involved in her work practically to the exclusion of all else, and seems to be the type of person that is so average that she would (in real life) virtually disappear. If your character is dull at the beginning of the story - before you even get him/her on the page - you're going to find it hard to get excited about this person's story. And that lack of enthusiasm is going to come across to your reader (if you ever get to have a reader, because having a reader implies publication). So let's look at a few tips on character creation. 1. Create Characters That Interest You Hero or bad guy, the character has to hook YOUR interest before anyone else's! You're the one who is going to have to sit down in front of a computer day after day and chronicle this person's life. Remember that most readers read as a form of escape - they love being drawn into the world of the story; to become engrossed in a character's life. They certainly aren't going to be engrossed by a bore. Nor are you! 2. Don't Create Characters That Are Too Black and White - or Too Perfect No matter how admirable your character is, she should have a flaw. That's what makes her human. While heroes should be (for the most part) honorable, resilient, proactive and brave, they should also have moments of fear, cowardice, depression and anger. None of this should last too long, though. We admire people who battle through (especially if it's against tremendous odds) - but we do need to feel that there's a chance that they'll fail. None of us is perfect, and it's hard to identify with someone who is: too kind, too moral, too beautiful, too noble... you get the picture. Similarly, most 'bad' people have some redeeming quality. That's not easy to find in a truly evil villain, but we're talking MOST characters here. If you make your hero all good and your antagonist all bad, the book gets boring. 3. Give Your Character an Interesting Quirk You don't have to do this for all your characters, but it's a good way to make a character come to life. Case in point: Kinsey Millhone (series character in Sue Grafton's "A is for Alibi" series) and her love of small, confined spaces. We find out early in the series why Kinsey is like this, and from book to book Grafton builds on this quirk in her personality. Don't be afraid to make one or two of your characters totally over the top. This works well in humorous novels like those written by Carl Hiaasen. 4. Give Your Character a History Sometimes I get the feeling that a character was born on page 1 and will float off into the ether when the time the book ends. What has happened to your character in the past determines who they are today. It decides how they will react to others, how they react to stress, and how they handle adversity. Think about your own life. When you need a favour, you call on a friend or relative. Where did they come from? Somewhere in your past. When something bad happens, you tend to reflect on what led up to it. You go somewhere new, and an unexpected sight or smell sends you back to the past. Your character's thoughts should reflect that past, so spend some time thinking about it. You don't have to sit down and write about it exhaustively - either when creating the character or when writing about her - but you should know where she comes from. Here's a tip: If you're creating a series character, don't map out his/her past in too much detail - leave some hazy areas so you can build in surprises later in the series. 5. Give Your Character a Network Who does your character know - at work, at home, socially? How do these others fit into her life? How much does she need other people? What does this network tell us about this character? Does she attract losers? Does she surround herself with successful people? Who does she give a wide berth? Who is a threat? Is her family so protective that they are smothering her, or so distant that this causes emotional problems, or are they loyal and supportive? There's a lot more to creating characters that work, but these five tips will at least give you a cast of characters that you'll enjoy working with! Now let's look at how you write about your characters. One of the biggest flaws I see in a passage of writing (from both beginners and more experienced writers) is a flat recitation of what someone looks like or how they move. For example:
You might be wondering what's wrong with the description above. Mostly, it relies on fairly cliched images - the beer gut, the stained singlet, the stringy hair, bushy brows. Sure, a character may possess all of these things... but how might you present them so you convey personality to the reader, as well as appearance? Sue Grafton again comes to mind, because she 'does' description so well. Here is an excerpt from T is for Trespass. In the passage below, note that while Kinsey is waiting for a response to her knock at the door, she is observing a 'walk on' character: a neighbour. Thanks to the description of the setting in which the character (Gladys Frederickson) lives, including the neighbour, we get a sense that this place (and therefore the character) really exists.
Notice that the above example accomplishes two things: it tells us what Melanie looks like, but it also tells us a little more about the viewpoint character, Kinsey. Bottom line: Make your characters interesting not only for the reader's sake, but for your own - and convince us that they're real through insightful description of both the characters and their setting. |